Tuesday, 1 December 2015
My art survey
Arts Survey
Describe your ability as an artist. What do you like about Art?
I dont really like art
Describe your ability as an actor/ presenter. What do you like about acting/ presenting?
I dont really like acting/ presenting
Describe your ability as a dancer. What do you like about dance?
A little good
Describe your ability as a singer/ musician. What doe you like about music/ singing? I like singing and music very much
My persuasive writing
Kids can
I believe that if we didn’t have Kids Can Tautoro school would be not as good as it is.
Did you know Kids Can is the best? Kids Can is like Santa Claus to Tautoro school. One reason why I think Kids Can is magnificent is because they give us things like hats, bars, scroggins, nit shampoo, badges, jackets, pants, shoes and hand sanitizer. If your kids were walking in the freezing wind and rain everyday and then they got a jacket and a pair shoes they will be jumping up and down with happiness. If your child don’t get stuff from Kids Can you will be devastated when you see other people with Kids Can stuff.
But we get heaps free stuff like milk form vontera, sport gear and many more
The second reason why Kids Can is cool is because it makes kids want come to school.They can come and have a toast for breakfast. When your kids walk to school when it is raining and walking through cold puddles.Kids won’t go to school if they don’t have Kids Can.
In summary I think that Kids can is cool because it helps everybody and gives them stuff to learn with.
My leveling sheet
Element
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Rubric
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Comment
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Ideas
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6
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That was good that's why i gave you a six
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Structure and Language
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5
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That was good but there was some corrections that is why i gave you a 5
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Organisation
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5
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That was good but there was some corrections that is why i gave you a 5
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Vocabulary
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6
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That was good that's why i gave you a six
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Sentence Structure
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6
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That was good that's why i gave you a six
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Punctuation
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5
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That was good but there was some corrections that is why i gave you a 5
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Spelling
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6
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That was good that's why i gave you a six
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