Art Term 4

First Published Green-Screen In Room 5 Yeah!!!

I am learning to identify main ideas.

look at my score in Division level 1 in math magician games.

look at my score in multiplication level 1 in math magician games.

By the end of Year 6 I need to reading fluently. I want to have the confidence to adjust (by rereading, slowing down or focussing on the most difficult part of) my reading when I come across difficult parts. Here is a snapshot of my reading.

I think I am good at nothing in reading.

What I want to improve on is:
Not reading like a robot
Read sentences with a fluent voice
Pause at fullstops.

Last week I read The Ski Trip. It is a story about a boy named Anthony who needs to raises money for his school trip.

3. This is a poster.!!

I think the main idea is that Anthony was a smart business boy because he helps a nana and she asked what he charges. At first he thought ten dollars At first but then he said five dollars because she was giving him a big bag of plums and he wanted her to tell more people so he gets more money. This is the poster I created shows how I could raise money.

My Te Reo learning so far

What I have been learning about in writing

Kia ora, this term in writing I have been learning about persuasive writing. I have learnt that the purpose of persuasive writing is to persuade people to trying to make them want to agree with me

I have also learnt about the structure of persuasive writing. This is how you organise your ideas for persuasive writing. First you need introduction in your introduction you say what you think. For example owe should bring motorbikes to  school.Then you Main reason 1 main reason 2 with detail and then  summary (a short version)

                           

WALT think about the purpose and audience of our recount and create a success criteria that suits our purpose The purpose for writing is: My writing purpose to inform and interest my readers about an expertise

My success Criteria
begin with an intro who, why, what ,where.	yes
hook my reader
linking words/phrases	yes
use good punctuation
end with a reflection	yes
figurative language

My Plan

Introduction (hook)	Main Event 1 + feeling,	Main Event 2 + feeling,	Reflection
who,why,where,what me my dad and my mum	driving through the flood. nervous	watch the water go over the tyers. funny	making it through the flood

One morning me,my dad, my mum and my brother went to nana ma’s.My brother wanted to stay because he loves it there.So me,my dad and my mum went up town because my dad wanted to go up town and when we saw the flood my mum was like “no do not go through the flood My car might break”my mum said with a tone in her voice like she was nervous.My dad said “don’t worry about anything when I am driving nothing happens”. I was nervous because the water was deep.

It was freaky at first when we drove through the flood.But then it started to get fun.My dad gave me his phone so I could take photos and it was so deep.It went over the tyres.When I was sticking my head out of the window.My nana ma was behind us in a car and she was making faces at me when I was sticking my head out of the window.I was cracking up.My mum started to take photos and then when we got by the falls.My mum saw the flood and said “stop don’t go through the flood”my dad  “Shoosh I can make it”.And  then we made it through the flood and we passed someone.

I liked that day because I got to look at the gigantic flood.

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This is a true story I hope you like it

                

On the 29th of June the Tautoro Titans went down to Auckland (Mt Smart) to awhi Corey Naera.

When we got to Mt Smart I was jumping up and down with excitement like a kangaroo jumping in a tree to gets baby. Then Esmonde asked the under 20s if we could do the haka for them and we were waiting and then they walked straight past us and then we saw Corey and we done the haka for him it was so mean because Corey done the haka with us and you could see in his eyes he was like “yes, yes im home my brothers”.

After doing the haka we ran to our chairs and the whistle went, kick off time Corey caught the ball he past to the prop and the prop done a mean as bunt.

And then it was 5th and final Corey done a mean kick it went to the full back and then the warriors got a penalty the warriors kicked it out then they tapped it right next to the try and the warriors gave it to the prop he ran through all of them and Corey come running from the other side and smashed him and saved the try.

Finally when he finished his game the Tautoro Titans wanted to go by their huddle and do the haka for him put the security guards wouldn’t let us past because we needed a ticket then Corey saw us and walked over and we done another haka and he done with us and after the haka he signed all of the Tautoro Titans stuff. For walking away from his team like that it will cost him about 10,000 dollars.

I will never forget that day because I saw my brother.

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I am learning to plan and write an interesting narrative

                                      

A Long long time ago there was a school and a lovely class with 2 heroes they did not know about one named Anthony and one named Konrad they were muscly and abby.

One day the sky went black and suddenly Boom heaps of smoke came bursting down like an elephant’s trunk being lifted up and smashing on to the ground. And then heaps of little things came dropping out of the sky and they were,they were aliens!!!.

Five seconds later the two heroes Konrad and Anthony come sprinting out like a cheater trying to catch its prey, they pulled out their swords and guns one sword in one hand and one gun in the other hand the aliens were ripping peoples heads off and throwing everything and all of the kids were hiding under desks and under class rooms and running around screaming there heads off like a lion roaring its loudest “BOOM SHRINK CUT KNOCK DONG.”And the aliens they were scary because they had six tentacles and on their tentacles there were spikes with 7 eyes and they blinked like an owl and looked like an octopus that could walk.

Konrad and Anthony were finished with the aliens and the children were cheering for the two heroes Konrad and Anthony. “Yes we are saved the two heroes saved us”  and they all lived happily ever after.

WALT ask and answer questions about what we want using the word ranei

Kai kaha this why I am unique

Fast, cool, funny and sporty.

Son of Matt and Jean and brother of Andy.

Who’s a Lover of sports, mathematics  and aunty Sheridan's pie and chicken called ombler.

Who feels confident when he gets the ball in his hands

and Feels ecstatic when he scores a try

Who hates being punished, death and broken bones.

Who’s successful at playing rugby.

Who would like to  kick a goal from halfway and

see big tackle.  

Who lives down Orakau road.

Kopa