I am learning to plan and write an interesting narrative

                                      

A Long long time ago there was a school and a lovely class with 2 heroes they did not know about one named Anthony and one named Konrad they were muscly and abby.

One day the sky went black and suddenly Boom heaps of smoke came bursting down like an elephant’s trunk being lifted up and smashing on to the ground. And then heaps of little things came dropping out of the sky and they were,they were aliens!!!.

Five seconds later the two heroes Konrad and Anthony come sprinting out like a cheater trying to catch its prey, they pulled out their swords and guns one sword in one hand and one gun in the other hand the aliens were ripping peoples heads off and throwing everything and all of the kids were hiding under desks and under class rooms and running around screaming there heads off like a lion roaring its loudest “BOOM SHRINK CUT KNOCK DONG.”And the aliens they were scary because they had six tentacles and on their tentacles there were spikes with 7 eyes and they blinked like an owl and looked like an octopus that could walk.

Konrad and Anthony were finished with the aliens and the children were cheering for the two heroes Konrad and Anthony. “Yes we are saved the two heroes saved us”  and they all lived happily ever after.