This Is My First Draft Writing

   Sponge cake

I walked into the class wondering what we're doing today for technology mmmmmm I thought to myself. Then the bell rang and we sat down on the mat “miss what are we doing today for technology” I said with excitement “sponge cake” she replied “now get into groups of four or five” she said. It was frush straightening because everyone wanted to be with me and Anthony but we got through with it. Our group Me, Anthony, Hohepa, Tekaapua, Jordan.

Then we walked into room one  jam packed with excitement. racing to my table wooow cooking time I thought to myself. “Let's get started” I said to Whaea Meri  “Yeah we will in a minute i will just explain the reals ok” Whaea Meri replied “Ohh ok” I said back.

Then cooking started, we had to add four eggs and when we were separating the egg yolk and the egg white. Hohepa split the whole egg into the bowl with the egg whites, Me and Anthony said “ ahhh amo watch what  you are doing” then we had to get four more eggs and do it all over again. After that we had to  Beat four egg whites with one tablespoon of boiling water until the whites were stiff, for ages my hands were sore. But we took turns at stirring the egg white. one minute felt like it took for a whole year each.